InfiniteSnowfall

Note: I wrote this a few weeks ago. So, as I wrote this, I was going for the whole 'broken inside' kind of feeling. I imagined her body as if ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Would you mind explaining what you mean about the formatting? I don't really understand what you're trying to say. As I said, I am pretty ...

Thanks for the review, Blackwood! I do have trouble makeing the words flow together nicely. Your review helped me a lot, thanks again. :)

Haha no worries! I'm happy I could help :D

Thank you for the review manisha! I know that the whole 'coutndown buzzed' part is awkward sounding, but it had to be in there for the prompt contest. I'm not ...

Thank you for the review! I spent a lot of time trying to describe the paragraph you mentioned. And for the ending, I was having a hard time trying to ...

Thank you! His teacher was kind of a... Unique woman. *shrugs* Who knows? Haha :)

Thank buddy (haha)! :) Yes this is a true story. And honestly, I have no idea how to answer that question. This happened to my brother in school recently and ...

Yeah, I totally understand what you mean (when you said you had the idea and had to get it onto paper). Happens to me all the time. I like short ...

Thanks for the review! It's greatly appreciated. That's funny how you saw this when you first joined. Thanks again for the feedback! :D

Oh, really? I'm pretty good with grammar. It's a gift. Haha just kidding. Anyway, I'm glad I could help you out! :)

Anytime!

That's really cool! I would love to make my stories a manga also. The only thing stopping me is my horrible drawing skills. :/ Thanks for sharing that with me! ...

I think Kisami's perspective was written pretty well. I could easily understand what was happening, including Jintez, or Isugoro, not knowing about the conversation. The only part that confused me ...

That definitely sounds better. By the way, welcome to YWS! I didn't realize you just joined today. I hope you enjoy your stay. :)