Ineedy0u

Maybe ill write a sequel?

Also thanks for the help! I used most of your advice!

Well normally when you have a rush of adrenaline you are able to have an extra burst of strength. In this case, however, they were rusted and old, so even ...

I thought it was obvious, she tells the story. .. like she just told you.

first of all, wow. I am not very good at poetry myself, but you are amazing. I think if you could write professionally you wouldn't be disappointed with the results. ...

Thank you, and you can with a little practice; I am not perfect myself.

Thank you so much I will be editing it when the time presents itself. Also, I'll be taking your advice!

I realized that I used to many, I'm a freshman in high school so I ended up writing this in one class hour, so sorry for that I took more ...

I believe that the idea is he has a mental diorder and luca is actually not a real person but its him.

Thanks I'll do that! :)

I enjoyed thid poem, as it had a lot of inside hurt. However, I thought it was to adult for, "and being her grandfather was his game,". And i did ...

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Well first of i thought this was supposed to be funny. . . I was very wrong. I was really conffused in the beginning, but once i kept reading I ...