Incandescence

Of coure it had to be in there. How could it not be in there? His poetry is sexy.

I hope it's normal, because, I mean, the rest of America is absorbed in accentuating the boobies, sticking their penis into things, and finding better ways to stuff crust (funny ...

I figured it had something to do with FOB.

Be kinder? An aid is this reminder, doggerled yet truth stands by this humbling pride rewinder.

I'm sorry can't share janice's enthusiasm for this. To my ear it sounds like a garden-variety rant dressed up in faux poetic phrasing. Lines like "...Shouting abuse as I walk ...

Spectre's Hollow. Spectre's is possessive of the Hollow.

Thank God.

Nice imagery, but, like all of us, you need to take out excessive adjectives and look for redundancy (for instance, S1 has too many "mind" in it). I particularly enjoyed ...

Pale is a pun for pail. The idea is that I see things that do not exist (the clay jars, the old virgins) because I look through my own experience ...

Get out of the clouds and start making concrete imagery flow into your poetry. Abstraction is generally used for pretty playonwords, but generally is hard to beat down to a ...

Well, that's bad from a Lacanian standpoint. And besides, zombies don't make good world leaders.

It's part of the postmodern perspective on reality, Rei. Furthermore, if you have nothing constructive to say, please do not say anything at all.

Pretty with false meanings. Nobody forgets who or what they fight for. You illustrated a point well, but it isn't too unique, more a banter of colors and images.

You probably think it's cliche because I wrote a poem very similiar to it not too long ago. This is a modified version.

The poem isn't about slitting your wrists. It's about human nature: we expose our weaknesses to a society all too ready to gobble us up and crush our lifeless bones.