In_the_Moonlight

I thought it was good......... :roll: .......I think it reminds you of the terrier by Tamora Pierce.... Who said that?? *looks around with innocent puppy face* not me.... :lol: *laughs ...

Awwww. I love the ending it made me feel like a whole new story was about to be written. I can't really explain it, but I loved it. I was ...

Gosh- I love this story so far. Thanx for private messaging me or I would have missed out on this great chapter. Although I loved it I have to critique ...

This was a really good chapter, you found a nice place in the story to talk more about the coven. It didn't feel random or anything. I also like how ...

Bravo. That was really good. This poem was intense in several different ways. I'll just explain some of them. Overall: -easy flow -creative -painted a story -wonderful word choice -awesome ...

Wow, I liked how you continued this chapter. It was very entertaining and made the story more suspenseful. I don't think you ruined the tone of the story, if anything ...

This poem is really entertaining. I like the topic idea about if art could speak. I laughed when you talked about how the person in the picture was smiling, but ...

This poem didn't completely suck like you say it does. I just think it needs a lot of work. Some of it rhymes while most of it doesn't. I thought ...

I LOVED IT!!! Wow, that was really intense. I have too agree with Sapphire, this poem gave me goosebumps. I felt like I was reading a huge book! Then, before ...

Amazing! This was one of theee best poems I've read on here in a while. This gets both thumbs up from me. Through the air and through the trees You ...

I liked it. This poem was deep and had an intense story to tell. The only problem i did have was that you tended to rhyme part of the section. ...

Wow. This is a wonderful poem hands down. You had such a great concept of Iraq and the war. I do have a problem,however with some of your statements. I ...

You have a unique style of writing. This poem had a message in it, and I thought it was great that you had that in there. However, some of the ...

i liked this poem a lot. There were a few mistakes though. I couldn't really understand the first section, but I think that was mainly due to the rythm. Towards ...

This is another one of your great poems. I didn't quite understand the begining, I think you could've explained a lot more. The size of your poem could have been ...