ImHero

I liked it :) After reading it all, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. There are some mistakes in spelling and a lot of grammar ...

Doesn't have much of a rhythm or a rhyme scheme.. plus its very bad taste to use numbers in poetry that mean words..

Erm, defiantly a new read :p. There is a fine-point between vulgar and I think a few times you past it.. I don't like any of the scenes where they ...

Hey, since I really liked your piece I will be harsher then normal, so take my criticism lightly! It is great in its twist and turns taking the reader here ...

I like it! I am a bit harsh so take this criticism very lightly because I do truly admire the piece :) "My animals are all back neatly on my ...