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Re: Gay Fairyland
Does this have a double meaning about being gay? I don't mean it in an offensive way, it's just that fairy can be used as slang for gay(not sure if ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: only human
I like this poem a lot. I don't really understand it though. I got lost from the 4th line to the 8th,it's a tad bit too abstract. Other than that ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: What day is it?
I love this! I don't really know what else to say a about it. It's just fabulous.
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: Run away, Ray
I'm sorry about the kid that killed himself. I love the poem, it kind of reminds me of how I felt when I found out that my friend was raped. ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: Gift
Wow thanks :) the more choppy lines should be fixed in a day or two, depends on how much time I have. Thank you for the feedback
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: Gift
Yeah you're right, that line was a kind of awkwardly phrased. I struggle with getting my point across so I'll work on that. Thanks for saying you liked my poem! ...
Oct 23, 2013 -
Re: Bits and Pieces
I'm confused what the ending means. Also all of your poems are about being sad about life. How come? I feel like this is a little short and it doesn't ...
Oct 23, 2013 -
Re: Balloon
Well at least not yet
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Balloon
I can say whatever I want because no body will read this! I have chlamydia! Haha, just kidding , I don't
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Balloon
I actually kind of like that nobody has read or reviewed this , I feel like I'm in my house without my family. You know what this means. Right? No ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Balloon
I feel like I'm in one of those padded rooms where you're all by yourself
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Balloon
How do i delete something off here?
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: Burning Wings
Love the song/poem! Pretty darn goooood! I'm confused about "under all these scars". Is that literal or figurative?
Oct 14, 2013 - Re: Balloon Oct 6, 2013
