Ilium417

I just realized this is really big, sorry, this is my first thing on YWS! Don't feel like you need to be nice! Rip it apart! :D

No problem :D It's gonna be a really exciting book to read. Maybe I should get started on mine... XD

Oh something else that I didn't note in my review (my bad): It was really cool how you demonstrated the Clan's dependence on StarClan. It was awesome!

Yeah, I get it, sometimes you want a nice resolution at the end of a chapter :) I think the only problem with this ending is that it doesn't really ...

I think this is really cool! The names you have are really unique and I think the imagery in your head is super vivid. Besides some spelling and grammar errors, ...