Ikafe

Wow, I thought it was great, a bit too short (I would love to read more:) I don't think I saw any mistakes, but I'm not sure, sometimes they just ...

Oh my God...I love this story. It was Great. I like the whole plott. You had some spelling mistakes, but the passage is long and I can't find the anymore, ...

This was realy good. You have so much talent. Others above me already pointed out your small mistakes. I saw the whole story, infront of my eyes, I realy, realy ...

Hey GothicButterfly. This chapter was brilliant. You had some small spelling mistakes like... The next morning I was rudely awoken by a blinding light shinning down on me and sounds ...

Hey:) I thought this chapter was great. I love that her mum let her keep the puppy(soooo sweet:) I love the whole plott of the story. It was funny that ...

Hey, I realy liked the story, it was good. I don't think I saw any big mistakes in the passage so Keep it up. Karen didn't seem bad to me, ...

Hey, I liked this story. I read the prologue as well I thought it was quite mysterious. You did have some mistakes but others pointed them out already, I suggest ...

:wink: Hey, I totaly love this chapter. I read the prologue and the first chapter part 1 aswell. I like the plot of the story, it's all realy interesting and ...

Hey! This chapter is brilliant. I saw few mistakes in the story, I'm not going to point them out so I just suggest you proofread. Overall I love this story. ...

This is a very interesting story. I totaly loved it. It's cute, funny, sweet. I like the way he gives her notes it's soooooo cute. I'm about to read the ...

:arrow: This story is super. Ari has to go to a party full of boys, I would rather pretend that I was sick. It's going to be pretty hard for ...

I like this story, it's realy interesting, it makes you want to read more:) I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. This story is brilliant :P Could you PM ...

Oh I love the way this story is going, I think Ari is going to have a hard life at her new school, now she has to share a room ...

This song is realy beautiful, I love it, it's nice you dedicated it to the orphans. I love your songs, keep it up:) :arrow: Ikafe :arrow: :P

Oh I love this story, I couldn't stop reading until the end!!! I'm on my way to read the next chapter!!! :D I haven't seen any mistakes, somebody pointed out ...