IgniteTheStars

Hi, I just wanted to say, this has spoken to me on such a personal level, and probably many other people as well! As a teen myself, I really feel ...

Hi, I just want to say, WOW. This poem was very very different from some poems or even stories I've read, like talking about a murder from a first person's ...

Hi MoonFlower! (sorry for the late review, I got called away) I really liked the shortness of each line and it fits in quite well with the dramatics and powerful ...

Also, I especially liked the imagery and the words you chose. What really captured my attention was your first stanza. At first glance I actually thought it seemed unrelated to ...

Overall it's really great! I feel that you've managed to capture my attention by the description of the protagonist, and also some sort of suspense in wanting to find out ...