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How's it now Lumi? I read it aloud and put the punctuation in that way.

I don't need reviews anymore. Thanks Skins! You really are super! :D

Thanks Skins! I'm attempting to show that Warren's first criterion may apply to the fetus. I'm not sure if it can, but I think it might. My professor said that ...

Thank you for the review. Yes, people can use these snippets if they want. The first one, I used two of the characters from my novel and as I said ...

Thank you very much! This helps. I edit the chapter based on the reviews people give me. You should have seen the first iteration of this chapter. Thank you for ...

You're welcome. I don't think this would work for a short story contest though:(. Short stories tend to have very definitive endings. You can tell that they story's ended. With ...

Wait...I gave you the impression that they're brothers? Does it really read like that? They're not. I thought it was pretty clear...:( Can you point out the lines that gave ...

Wahhh! *Goes and looks at chapter* My formatting got messed up! :( It's fixed now. :)

Thanks! It's ok, November's a hectic month. I'll be off YWS for a while during the end of November and until the third week of December. That's when finals are. ...

Thanks! The article helps.

Yeah, I had all this pre-written, so I thought I'd post it up here and then edit it. Thanks for the rewiew! It helps.

Thank you all so much! Thank you so much for the detailed review Kiwi! No, you weren't rambling. I actually prefer long reviews because I knew this needed a lot ...

"So Rouge and Rapunzel had to explain the whole story" I don't think you need the had here. I love how air-headed Rapunzel seems to be.This is really good. Keep ...

Oh, ok. I must have missed that part. I guess I shouldn't read and review an hour before class starts. The painting looks like something my Art Theory class would ...

I like it. Did you have a specific melody in mind? I like how you're using clothes as a metaphor for the self.