Icaruss

It makes me sad that people have silly opinions.

This thread makes me sad.

It's just a stand alone piece. Thanks for the comments, though.

Thank you both. I know Tommy is the weakest character, but I rather like that we're not sure who the hell he is.

Thanks and welcome to YWS. (bump)

policeman came out of the blue (no pun intended) here and I don't think it matches the tone of the piece. 'cop' would do better. You speak the truth. Both ...

Well, I don't want to put it in italics because that would make it seem like they were dreams, or flashbacks. I want it to seem like it's all happening ...

This is the most bitter, hateful piece I've read here. Really, it's quite awful.

But... But... The whole point... With the... And... Mario Vargas Llosa... Sigh. Did you like it, at least?

This was funny. That's all I have to say.

Thanks a bunch. But I won't be putting the flashbacks in itallics.

This was funny. It's the kind of thing I expect to see somewhere in a poetry book, accompanied by other longer poems. There, I'd be like: "Whoa, baby." But alone, ...

Thanks! (that's another bump)

Man!