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Re: Punctuation Poem
Thanks for your review! I'm glad I got a good review, since I knew this would be a difficult piece to review. I've been considering maybe making another one that ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: Punctuation Poem
just thought I'd mention this as soon as I could: the equal signs mark stanzas, since the word program here didn't carry the stanzas over from google docs.
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: 2 Blank Verses
Thanks for the review!
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: 2 Blank Verses
I%u2019ll to my best to explain. 1: iambic pentameter is essentially the %u2018time signature%u2019 of the poem. It indicates how syllables are in a line and which are emphasized. Iambic ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: 2 Blank Verses
Thanks for you%u2019re review @haraya. My only response to your first criticism is that I should probably just get better at reading iambic pentameter and increasing my vocabulary. Your second ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: Last Spring
Thanks for your review! I would have gotten back to you earlier but it didn%u2019t show up in my notifications. If you%u2019re interested in learning more about music and have ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: A Man's Aimless Trek
Hi. Just thought I’d leave a comment. I don’t have much deep to say. This is basically unreadable, I would highly suggest splitting it into paragraphs. Hopefully this helps.
Jun 5, 2020 -
Re: ^0
I%u2019m glad you found this funny. All the number bits were me playing with how we associate numbers and their words with one another, personally I think I shouldn%u2019t be ...
May 17, 2020 -
Re: ^0
welcome to the world of avant-garde literature my friend!
May 11, 2020 -
Re: ^0
I was just saying that, though I never really understood why and number to the power of zero is 1. after an entire day just looking at resources that explain ...
May 11, 2020 -
Re: The Life, Times, and Adventures of the Oxford Comma
Thank you! I will work on my transitions. I'm currently doing the basic outlining for an essay on the Baroque art movement, so keep a look out for that. I ...
May 11, 2020 -
Re: The Life, Times, and Adventures of the Oxford Comma
Thanks.
May 8, 2020 -
Re: Fairy Tales: 4-6
Thanks! I%u2019m not particularly happy with %u201Cthe forest%u2019s song%u201D myself, I did my best to salvage it, but it needs a complete overhaul, so I%u2019m glad for your review. Thanks. ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: ...
you're welcome, I'd review more of your works, but I just don't have the time. I look forward to seeing more of your reviews on my work.
Mar 23, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hello. It’s been a while. So why waste time. First, you said you needed help cutting words out, I am more than happy to help so let’s get straight to ...
Mar 22, 2020
