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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Punctuation Poem

    Thanks for your review! I'm glad I got a good review, since I knew this would be a difficult piece to review. I've been considering maybe making another one that ...

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Punctuation Poem

    just thought I'd mention this as soon as I could: the equal signs mark stanzas, since the word program here didn't carry the stanzas over from google docs.

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 Blank Verses

    Thanks for the review!

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 Blank Verses

    I%u2019ll to my best to explain. 1: iambic pentameter is essentially the %u2018time signature%u2019 of the poem. It indicates how syllables are in a line and which are emphasized. Iambic ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 Blank Verses

    Thanks for you%u2019re review @haraya. My only response to your first criticism is that I should probably just get better at reading iambic pentameter and increasing my vocabulary. Your second ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Last Spring

    Thanks for your review! I would have gotten back to you earlier but it didn%u2019t show up in my notifications. If you%u2019re interested in learning more about music and have ...

    Jun 6, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Man's Aimless Trek

    Hi. Just thought I’d leave a comment. I don’t have much deep to say. This is basically unreadable, I would highly suggest splitting it into paragraphs. Hopefully this helps.

    Jun 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ^0

    I%u2019m glad you found this funny. All the number bits were me playing with how we associate numbers and their words with one another, personally I think I shouldn%u2019t be ...

    May 17, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ^0

    welcome to the world of avant-garde literature my friend!

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ^0

    I was just saying that, though I never really understood why and number to the power of zero is 1. after an entire day just looking at resources that explain ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: The Life, Times, and Adventures of the Oxford Comma

    Thank you! I will work on my transitions. I'm currently doing the basic outlining for an essay on the Baroque art movement, so keep a look out for that. I ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: The Life, Times, and Adventures of the Oxford Comma

    Thanks.

    May 8, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fairy Tales: 4-6

    Thanks! I%u2019m not particularly happy with %u201Cthe forest%u2019s song%u201D myself, I did my best to salvage it, but it needs a complete overhaul, so I%u2019m glad for your review. Thanks. ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    you're welcome, I'd review more of your works, but I just don't have the time. I look forward to seeing more of your reviews on my work.

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    Hello. It’s been a while. So why waste time. First, you said you needed help cutting words out, I am more than happy to help so let’s get straight to ...

    Mar 22, 2020


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