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Honestly, I%u2019m not quite sure what you%u2019re saying in most of this. I believe when you are referring to %u2018the princess and the frog%u2019 you are referring to the third ...

Thanks for your review! something that jumped out at me when I read it was that you recommended I remove the parentheses in the last story. I sent that story ...

Thank you for your review, @Mellifera , this was unexpected but certainly not unwelcome. I was actually editing this before I decided to briefly check up on YWS (I'm hoping ...

Thanks for your review! I think most of the issues with tense are due to typos. I agree that: "your dream slips away from you, you forget it | After ...

Thanks for your review! I am not particularly interested in writing a sequel or a second part, but I might if inspiration strikes me, so thanks for putting the idea ...

Thank you for your review! I'm not offend, though I am slightly confused (especially at your interpretation of the last poem, but we'll get there) The first four poems in ...

I'm glad you liked them! you're review put me in a very good mood. There isn't any real significance to that, just thought I'd thank you for putting a little ...

Thank you for your review! The lines you listed were not intentionally left uncapitalized and I will go through and fix this later, since I'm supposed to be doing schoolwork ...

This isn%u2019t a rendering of an actual myth, I just used goddesses to represent different types of beauty; Nyx is the Greek goddess of night, Aroura is (if I remember ...

I second what @icyflame said: I wouldn%u2019t mind reading the next part when you post it. Also, apologies for not replying earlier, I wasn%u2019t notified of your tag in my ...

Okay. Thanks!

Also, I was wondering about something: do apostrophe s%u2019s count as a separate syllable? I use a syllable counting software most of the time and I was fairly sure its ...

Thanks for your review! I%u2019ve heard a lot about needing to work on my meter so I%u2019ll do that. Something I%u2019m glad you mentioned was that you didn%u2019t really feel ...

Thanks for your review! The story you applied to this is quite interesting, and I%u2019m glad someone could get a coherent story out of this because I certainly couldn%u2019t (not ...

@whatchamacallit Thanks for the tip, I will keep that in mind for the future.