IamI

Introduction Hi. I've been sitting on this almost since I posted my last review on one of your works. Things happen sometimes. bad Style General One gripe I have about ...

Preface this will be my first review of the year. It is probably my longest, too. Bad Plot: I don’t like the ending in context with the rest of the ...

Hello again. It's been a little while, school can be like that. Let's begin Bad Logic They had asked me to lead them. this seemed to come out of nowhere, ...

Hello. Here is my review. Preface Reviews are a funny thing, especially when you find one from a year ago that you had intended to write, but never did; and ...

Hello @morrigan, IamI and I am here to give a short review. I would like to preface this review with three statements. First: I usually avoid reviewing poetry, I’m not ...

Intro Hi @liminality! Remember when said I’d be reviewing this soon? Turns out I’m even worse at keeping promises than I though. Let’s begin. Bad until there was only him ...

Hi @liminality! I’m ditching my new review structure because most of my criticism is stylistic. With that out of the way let me begin. The bad as I said, most ...

Preface Hi @hgsomeone, I’m here for a slightly belated review (I’ve had the link to this copy pasted for so long it still gives the title of the piece as ...

Preface Hello @Noelee77, I've been itching to review this for a while. Unfortunately I cannot say it's because this work was of outstanding quality. Bad Logic Age 10 his lungs ...

Hello. This is my review I’m tired. Mg phone’s low on power, and I only have a few things to say. This means that my review will be 1000 words ...

Preface Hello. I’m @IamI and this is my review. I had several pages of notes but to save my sanity and so I have time to do anything else today, ...

Hello. This is my review. The issue with reviewing stories as good as this one is that I find my self unable to come up with any criticisms. I ran ...

Hello. This is my review. This is short and I have plenty to say about it. Let’s get on with this shall we The bad This story didn’t seem to ...

Hello. This is my review. The bad. This story is awkwardly written and there were several issues that gave me the impression that you were very young or learning English; ...

Hello. This is my review. This might be short or it might not. Let’s get on with it. Criticism: My greatest criticism is that this doesn’t need to be a ...