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Re: Halloween
Hey There - This was a pleasure to read, but I have some suggestions... First - there are a lot of cut and clean syllables - they sort of jut ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Drained
Hey There - When the heart is full, of course that is the best time to write! I'm glad you did, I rather enjoyed this one. The use of repitition ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Mirror Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest one of all?
Hey There - Wow. Wait - I have to read this one again - it is too good... Ok - I love the layout - it is smooth, with a ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Crashing Waves
Hey there- Oh man. I'm not sure where to begin. I thought this was pure genious. So original. There is so much life. It flows. It is obvious what you ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Named Suffering
Hey there - nice poem. I loved the fact that you are soley painting a picture - it is only an image that you are making to pull at the ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Bruises
Hey There - I liked this one. It has nice imagery, and the movement is nice. The begining confused me a bit, but it was well written - it flows ...
Oct 29, 2011
