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Very good, very interesting subject matter, very intense, mature and dramatic. I would probably re-do the typing, like put it in stanzas or something. The third from last sentence seems ...

I like this poem so much and I really really agree with you, I feel this way myself! Only question is the "broken winged bird" analogy (sounds like Hughes' "Dreams"), ...

This was honestly very good, I like that it's so short you can easily remember it and say it to yourself often. Very nice rhythm and word flow. It makes ...

Hello BeckFletch! I will start off by saying that the chorus is indeed the strongest part of the song, I can feel the rhythm of it in my head. It ...

I really like this song, the chorus is amazing, one of those times I wish I could hear the tune. My favorite part is: Jump on the wave that’s crashing ...

Hello! You took this story and brought it to the audience in a very unique way. I like how my mind raced throughout the story trying to figure out what ...

I love this idea, it speaks to so many real emotions that everyone's felt, that crush, that love that you keep inside and never gets out. Wanting the person to ...

I really like this song, it's uplifting without being cheesy or preachy which is a difficult thing to balance in songwriting. My favorite part is : Keep breathing cause someday ...

I like this idea but I'm not totally sure if there is enough, i know some of the troubles that she's going through, what she looks like and what she ...

I don't think it's too cliche to not be good. All romantic pieces for instance follow a "boy-meets-girl, boy-loses-girl, boy-gets-girl-back" storyline., so you could easily say that any romantic book ...