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Re: Fire
Fire... the gift and the curse. In this day and age we can all be named Prometheus and if we are not careful and respectful we all can suffer as ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: A Traffic Accident
I'll have to agree with the first review, needs more emotion, but other than that great flow to the story. Is it a relation to society? How people seemingly become ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Lair of Beast
With further detail that short could have turned into a very big dramatic story. Description would have made this piece easier to read. Your characters are in this, what seems ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Parva
Clown Shirts and Magical Unicorn Pegasus Kittens... Golden !! It got my attention. However, in the story things just seem to happen, with no build up or development. And that ...
Oct 8, 2010