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I absolutely fell in love with this piece. I think that your rhyme scheme was spot on, it was very consistent without being to much, which is always refreshing. Personally, ...

I really, really liked this! It flowed nicely and I like the story that was told, no offence to you, it's relatable, which is good! favorite stanza: "It started when ...

I related to this, not to long ago. I love this, the feeling is there, and it drew me in with the first stanza, especially: "...... To slit my wrists, ...