IKnowAll

This is amazing! I feel a sense of hope reading it, and I wasn't even sad or anything before reading it.

This is beautiful, I felt I would cry at one point, it's hard to explain why exactly, it was just... Yep, I'm unable to describe it. It's just that beautiful.

Very gripping start. I look forward to reading the next few chapters, I don't know what to say about the storyline... well, keep writing, I guess. I see a lot ...

Hmmm... I can't decide what mine would be. Pretty cool though. I really don't know what else to say...

Good job, can't wait to see more, I noticed some errors, but if they were anything important I'd remember them. Well, I'd like to say I thoroughly enjoyed that. Keep ...

Creepy... Only problem I noticed was that you should add quotation marks, and when it says everyone laughed, wouldn't the person being insulted not laugh? Just sayin'. Well, have a ...

Fabulously creepy! I always like this kind of poetry! Perfect for little kids. MUAHAHAHAHA! Seriously though, good job. Pat yourself on the back, and have a good day. -IKnowAll

Hehehe I bet the kids were singing this while raking the leaves up. :) I thoroughly enjoyed that. Good day! -IKnowAll

Wow. Creepy! 0o Good. Maybe should be in horror? I don't know, I'm bad with reviews... Have a good day! -IKnowAll

Hehehe... Fabulously creepy! Don't know what else to say. Keep writing and have fun!

I'm bad at reviews, so I won't be able to help you improve... But I'll boost your confidence! Great job! Definitely worth the read!

I think you were right about "their" but it was actually supposed to be "county" (a county is a group of cities or something...) not country. thanks for the review! ...

Sounds good so far, but it doesn't seem like you'll be adding to this any time soon... Too bad... Sounded pretty interesting...

Great! I don't know what it was particularly, but this kept my interest through the whole thing... I rarely remember my dreams... Well, it doesn't seem like you'll be adding ...

Awesome! I'm not that good of a critic, but I'd say maybe more descriptions on the characters would be nice. I'm not one to talk though, as I have about ...