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Re: Don't Give Up on Life
This is amazing! I feel a sense of hope reading it, and I wasn't even sad or anything before reading it.
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: m
This is beautiful, I felt I would cry at one point, it's hard to explain why exactly, it was just... Yep, I'm unable to describe it. It's just that beautiful.
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Keeper Prologue
Very gripping start. I look forward to reading the next few chapters, I don't know what to say about the storyline... well, keep writing, I guess. I see a lot ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: [The Most Epic] Desert Island Discs Project, Part III
Hmmm... I can't decide what mine would be. Pretty cool though. I really don't know what else to say...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Staring Stars (Contest Entry, Feedback Please!) MAJOR EDITS
Good job, can't wait to see more, I noticed some errors, but if they were anything important I'd remember them. Well, I'd like to say I thoroughly enjoyed that. Keep ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Smile
Creepy... Only problem I noticed was that you should add quotation marks, and when it says everyone laughed, wouldn't the person being insulted not laugh? Just sayin'. Well, have a ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: The Puppeteer
Fabulously creepy! I always like this kind of poetry! Perfect for little kids. MUAHAHAHAHA! Seriously though, good job. Pat yourself on the back, and have a good day. -IKnowAll
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Leaves are Falling Down
Hehehe I bet the kids were singing this while raking the leaves up. :) I thoroughly enjoyed that. Good day! -IKnowAll
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Prolouge
Wow. Creepy! 0o Good. Maybe should be in horror? I don't know, I'm bad with reviews... Have a good day! -IKnowAll
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Ode To Zombies [contest entry]
Hehehe... Fabulously creepy! Don't know what else to say. Keep writing and have fun!
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Imo: Split Personality Chp 1
I'm bad at reviews, so I won't be able to help you improve... But I'll boost your confidence! Great job! Definitely worth the read!
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Shell Island
I think you were right about "their" but it was actually supposed to be "county" (a county is a group of cities or something...) not country. thanks for the review! ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Gray~ Chp. 2
Sounds good so far, but it doesn't seem like you'll be adding to this any time soon... Too bad... Sounded pretty interesting...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: ~Endlessly Falling~
Great! I don't know what it was particularly, but this kept my interest through the whole thing... I rarely remember my dreams... Well, it doesn't seem like you'll be adding ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Imo: Split personality
Awesome! I'm not that good of a critic, but I'd say maybe more descriptions on the characters would be nice. I'm not one to talk though, as I have about ...
May 13, 2011