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Re: Dear YWS
I loved it!!! It's like a disease it follows you everywhere. I go to sleep thinking about what I want to read next or review next. This is soo true. ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
*Laughs and smiles* I love this poem. You've relayed a message some people need to know in a hilarious way. Keep up the great work. You are really talented!
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Say Again
Thank You ^ I will definately work on those :)
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Carly with no Daddy
This is amazing, I loved it. You are so talented. :) Keep up the great job!
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
Thank you pointe , I will make sure to change those things. :) . Thank you so much for reviewing my work and thank you for giving me those tips ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
Thank you Bibi. I agree that some parts do need to be fixed but I appreciate you reviewing me story. Thank you soo much for your opinion on my story ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
Hahah thanks so much Kaka. Yes it is my first short story romance and I'm pretty proud of it. Thank you so much and nah, :P . Thank you for ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Thank you Ktg17 , thank you for reviewing me story. I will definitely fix those mistakes and it's okay that you didn't like the beginning, everyone has a different opionon ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Thank you Addawen, I will look forward to reading your other rewviews :) . Idda is Tessa , yes , that will become clearer through out the rest of the ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
Thank you everyone, it was my first short story and just wanted to see what you guys would think. I will definitely change those mistakes and add those suggestions. It ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: How Rain was Created
Thank you. It's a school assignment for English and was just wondering what people thought about it. Thank you and that's ok. Ok :) Wicked
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Hi, thatboy. Thank you for reviewing my work. Thank you , I haven't been working on it for that long so it's great to hear all this feed back early ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles ~ Chapter 3 - 5
Thank you Alzora. This has helped me a lot. This was fast posting because my mom was getting mad at me because it was getting late and I need to ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles ~ Chapters 1 -2
Thank you Alzora, I will fix those mistakes soon. I haven't read the Maximum Ride series. I try to not make my writing like other books so I will see ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Thank you Alzora, I will definitely fix those mistakes. I tried to the people's thoughts in italics but it would not work at the time. I will go fix that ...
Oct 5, 2010
