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Re: Remembering Dana
'Advancement's bus' aptly describes technological advents and changes that r said to be good but in this case(The Dana plane crash of Lagos,Nigeria),such 'progress' have their own drawbacks. And in ...
Jan 3, 2013 -
Re: Remembering Dana
Man,I dunno why each time I submit my stuff it turns out jumbled and earns me bad reviews. Admin should look into this.
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Wet Paint, Red Hands
In a figurative sense, this poem seems like a jab at outward beauty and fancies. It ridicules the shiny outside whose inside are in the words of Jesus in the ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: I Love The Dirt
It is kinda ironic you love the dirt yet desire cleansing. It is obvious you are in a jam, torn between your need for a cleansing rain- a change, a ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: Insanity.
But to be honest, I got stymied. Somewhere along the lines,you lost me...grumbling clarity and simplicity would definitely help your case
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: Insanity.
Hmm, thought provoking piece
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: A Christmas Death In Oldtown Valley [16+]
Believe me dudes,these jumbled paragraphs and run-on arrangements ain't my fault one bit. The editing box converted it to thither chaos when I submitted
Dec 27, 2012