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Hmm I agree, the second verse has been a problem for this piece, but I didn't know how else to go about it >< "Repent" and "men", is men pronounced ...

Thanks for pointing out those errors, Red!! Really appreciate the detailed review... Hmm Hong Kongers, Hongkies, not too sure. :/ Thanks again! :D

Awwww omg thank you!!

Haha hello there :) That line refers to an overwhelming sense of self that's disguised as a concern over everything else around me. In other words, it's just me worrying ...

Exactly....couldn't have said it better myself :)

Awww thank you!

Hellloo Jessie :) "I am a million dead ends rolled into one common beginning of being proceeded by an empty step the height of a 4-storey building." What I was ...

Hey Sylar14, thanks a lot for the encouragement! Really appreciate it... It's been the longest road but I'm finally free! I hope and pray that you'll find your freedom soon.

I see......sounds very original!

me, it sounds like a barista telling long-winded stories to his tired, decaffeinated customers. xD What's unique about this is that although the emotions play heavily on the customers, the ...

Okay :)

HAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHHAHA OMG SO FUNNY....Yes, thank you, I love this. This was brilliant which means I've not enough words to make this into a review. xD

Wow, screw him/her. This is cyber-bullying. You know, this truly reminds me of the death of Megan Meier. It's heartbreaking to see what the internet could do to people and ...

dear. This poem started out great, like I had no idea how it linked to the title. But it ended too abruptly. This needs another ending! Or maybe more stanzas ...

it stupid for me to say that I kinda love this but I don't understand what it's about? >< Pleaseeee enlighten me :) P.S. I love it because you wrote ...