How2EataRhesus

Wow. Really good script. There are of course some grammatical errors - you're missing a lot of apostrophes - but that's not major. Towards the beginning of the play the ...

Really amusing. I loved the sort of awkwardness between Death and Tom; it was very Hitchhiker's Guide -ish. And Death was a little like...well, a cheery Marvin. [: Just one ...

Wow. I like this piece; it has a really haunted feel to it. Gold star for you. :] The first three pills are lifted to her mouth, drowned in water ...

Hiii. :] Just a few nitpicks here for the sake of extremely unreasonable perfectionism: Why yes. Without endings, we cannot have beginnings. I am DEATH, of course. There's nothing really ...

This actually brought tears to my eyes. Really moving. It’s not your fault, I want – no, need you to know that. It’s completely mine. The blame rests wholly on ...

The Green Mile , Stephen King - the only book to ever (admittedly) made me cry. :] Pride and Prejudice , Jane Austen - If there happens to be an ...

I could recognize almost everything the author says from my conversations with myself. =D Deja vu much? The only real nitpick I have is with the amount of parentheticals (the ...

I first read TKAM when I was eleven, and was okay. But just okay. I'm not quite sure why I don't seem to favor it as much as most people; ...

Win. :lol: My only suggestions: 1. Make Meyer have an uber-inflated ego. I mean, as arrogant as flippin' possible, even compared to how conceited she's already portrayed as. 2. Show ...

M'kay, here are the usual nitpicks: 1. But now this little body that had been inside me for so long was in the morgue. The length of this sentence (without ...

The Clique by Lisi Harrison. It's TERRIBLE, and the other books in the series are even worse. That's all I can really say about it before I start to yell ...