HostofHorus

I love these books so much! Like seriously, they were the books that first got me wanting to read! They were sooooo good, and I'm really bummed, because (although I ...

Hey there! Ok, I really liked it :D it was really sad though! :'( Nevertheless, it was good. A few things to point out. It was said above, but.... Those ...

As said above, I completely agree with the killing. It was just kind of random, and there could be a lot more leading up to it. You could maybe try ...

All I can really say... is that... I LOVED IT!! This hit a soft spot in my heart right now that I've had for the last little while, and it ...

I to liked this a lot. I really don't have much to say in regards to anything wrong. Someone above said to take out commas, however that would be wrong. ...

I really like the way you write, and the way you describe things... Maybe use that to give us a setting? We don't know much from this first chapter, hopefully ...

I agree a little with GregPugn, but not to such a large degree. You went overboard on the ..... That is not needed... Try a few more descriptive words, and ...

I completely agree... It was almost exactly like The Hunger Games, thus I think ruining what could have a been a huge series right up there with the dreaded Twilight ...

K, I'm new to poetry. I don't know, this was a good. I liked it. Didn't love it but liked it. For one of your first posts, it is pretty ...

K, can I start by saying I have no idea how you came up with all of the names. I like them, and they are very original. I liked it, ...

Ok, there are some typos in there, and I don't know that I like the Old style of writing. It was a pretty good story though. I say rewrite this ...

This is my favorite series EVER! I love them, they were all amazing and all of you that say they should have killed Alex... I can't believe you, I have ...

Ahhh I love these one of my favorite series ever! Flanagan is amazing. My favorite was the Sorcerer of The North which was absolutely astounding. I didn't care much for ...

I'm sorry to say but I do kind of agree with the above.... And I'm not to fond of the name forte... as said above however, this was rather short ...