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Thank you for taking the time to review these chapters! :D

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Thank you for the review! There are probably going to be some inconsistencies about Jo%u2019s %u201Cpolitical%u201D beliefs while I figure out exactly what I want to do with them. In ...

Thank you so much for the review! I%u2019m always really happy to hear your thoughts%u2026 and you%u2019re definitely onto something with your theorizing ;)

Thank you so much! I definitely agree with my use of filler words in the final stanza. There was something clunky about it that I couldn't put my finger on, ...

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Hi! Thank you so much for the review! Was there anything about this poem you thought I could improve upon?

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Thank you for the review! The description of the people being gray/Carter being a giant was meant to be non literal, which I will try to clear up when I ...

Of course! It's something that I still struggle with, but I've learned a lot of great pointers! 1. Occasionally cut out conjunctions. (words like but, though, also, etc.) in the ...

Thank you, lol. I was far too proud of it!

Thanks for the review! The third person/present tense took me awhile to settle on, but I found I really enjoyed writing in this particular style, and that it suited the ...