HopelessAbandon

I'm so glad you like it! I'll definitely go through and change some things around, and more description shows up in chapter three. :)

I'm glad you like it, thank you for reading!! :D

Thank you so much for the review! I do agree will you about the criticism thing. I'm just very self-conscious of my writing, and it took a lot for me ...

Yes, the little girl is going to come back in later. :) Also, this is a faerie circle (I'm so glad you knew that!!) and you'll figure out that the ...

Thank you! I actually have two more chapters up, if you want to look at them. :)

Haha okay sweet. Thank you! :D

Thank you! :D

NP! :)

Awesome! I'm rereading this, and I'm gonna do another little mini review again, just for a couple things I noticed this second time around!

A girl! Haha, that'll become more evident in the later chapters. :)

Haha thanks. :)

Thanks for your review! Some of the description will come later, since I have two characters, their perspectives overlap sometimes. Hopefully in the next chapter I'll be able to take ...

It comes in later, something that's important to the plot. It's also just a working title, I wasn't sure exactly what to call it, so I may end up changing ...