HopelessAbandon

Hi! Here to review another chapter :) It’s possible that Our Ford In Heaven was blameworthy for this, as he deduced the number of days in the work week and ...

Hello!:D Review timeeee, finally. one of which I changed into and the other of which was stuffed into a leather bag containing the other essential items I’d thought to bring. ...

Heyo! Here to review as requested! So this is a really interesting piece first off. Stream of consciousness is always fun to read. There are a few things that I ...

Hello! You're my 75th review! Yay! :p Sorry to say that I have not read the previous chapters. I may go back eventually to read them, but for right now, ...

Hello! Just going to let you know that I have not actually read any of the chapters before this unfortunately. So if I'm confused about something, don't bang your head ...

Hi! Here for a review! First off, I have not read the first two chapters of this. My review is going to be mostly grammar and sentence structure stuff because ...

Alright. -cracks knuckles- lets get this going. Also, it's not too long. I can do this. :p (P.S. I'm going to tear you a new one, so only take about ...

Hello! First of all, this is rather long. In the future, I would suggest trying to break up your chapters a bit so that they're a tad friendlier for the ...

Hi! Here to review! :D Nitpicks: at the small fuzzy blinking at her Okay, so I was really confused reading this. Should "fuzzy" be capitalized? I would maybe suggest describing ...

Alright! HopelessAbandon here to review! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, but here I am as promised! :) If I repeat anything, apologies, I tried ...

Hello! Back again. There were many things that needed doing, but they could all wait. It’s not like I had a time limit when I was in the Void anyways. ...

Hello again! One thing you couldn’t say about the Iropolice was that they weren’t kind There are too many negatives in this sentence, and it took me a minute to ...

HopelessAbandon here again! Just gonna jump right in! Lilly was already half way through pulling her gun out when a door appeared in the wall and opened. Why does she ...

Hi! Is there a way to edit this, and change the block format? If so, you should so that other people who want to read your earlier chapters in order ...