HomelessPorcupine

Finally Edited!

**Bump for Edited version.**

Thanks for the reviews everyone! When I edit, I'll be sure to refer back to these reviews! -HP

Thanks for the reviews everyone! I'll be sure to use your input when I rewrite. Elinor, the first half of the story was actually from the lake's point of view. ...

Thanks for all of the input guys, I'm glad that you all enjoyed it! I'll edit it and then put it back up for all of you to see. :D

Thanks for the input Creative! I was going to call you 'Mr. Freak', but decided I liked the name 'Creative' instead. I'll be sure to take your review into account ...

Thanks! I'm glad that it wasn't completely terrible! I went to English yesterday, and was chosen to read it in front of the class, so I guess that the Professor ...

((Sorry for taking so long to respond with the edit guys, school, work and all that stuff. You'll notice that I didn't take all of the goriness out. I tried, ...

Thanks a lot for the input guys! I really appreciate it.