HomelessPorcupine

Hey Taylor, this is a really cool story! I glanced at her, feeling her pain and confusion, and tried to remember what we used to be. Back when she was ...

Hello Brooklyn! I'm HP and I'll be your reviewer today! First off I want to say that this was interesting. I had a good time trying to figure out what ...

Hello Lena and welcome to YWS! I'm Porc/HP and I'll be your reviewer today! I just came back after a long hiatus though, so I may be a little rusty. ...

Hello Ilya! (or do you prefer 'Eelz'?) Welcome to YWS! As Griffin said, the is sort of disjointed. However, the entire thing kept me hooked, I'm not exactly sure why. ...

Hey Elinor! You decided to grace me with one of your reviews, so I shall do the same! I really liked this story, partly because it was so well done ...

Hey Baywolf, HP again! :) I haven't reviewed anything for a few days, so I saw yours and thought that I would! First off, this is a great concept. Angels ...

Hey Sierra, HP here! This piece was interesting, though it was hard to get into at first, as it seemed sort of emotionless until towards the end. I liked the ...

Hey Nonsense, I'll be your reviewer for today! First off, I would like to say that I enjoyed reading this. The connection you made between swinging and being a teenager ...

Hey Possible, HP here! Before I get to the meat of the review, I just wanted to say that you have good potential. Also, your writing is nice, if not ...

Hey there Imagine! This is a nice story that you've written, though there are a few things that can be improved. One of the main things I noticed is that, ...

Hey there Queen! Before I get started on the review, I wanted to say that this story is developing really well. A lot of people tend to think that the ...

Hey Sierra! This was interesting. Before I give you the critique, I wanted to say that though you can definitely tell that this was a spur-of-the-moment piece, it was well ...

Hello Sailor! Before I start the critique part of the review, I want to say that this really hit me. This is a good message that is ignored too often ...

Hey there Baywolf! So first off, I really like this story so far. Your take on Pandora's personality is great and makes me laugh. I especially like the rebirth idea. ...

Heya S.S. Rose! This is very interesting, albeit a bit confusing at times. As I was reading it, I had to stop and think about what was going on, and ...