Holysocks

Thanks for the review, Liz! Yup, I'm definitely going to need to revise this so it's less confusing. I kind of got excited and threw a lot of seemingly random ...

I take note of it and hopefully give you a review on it. c: It might, however, take me a little while to get to it- there's a couple other ...

Can I have a link?

Thanks for the review! :D

Haha, you're welcome! XP. Interesting to hear that about Aiden for sure! I definitely don't hate him for it. :P

No problem! :-P

I really like "trill"! When I first read "avarice" I wasn't too sure, but then I read it as a whole in the stanza and it seemed to fit really ...

That's good to hear- still will be hard to wait though xP

Thanks for the review! Actually poems don't always follow punctuation laws/grammar, etc. Thanks again!

Thanks Morri! This was just what I was looking for. I admit I have a tendency to add access stuff, because people generally dislike the shortness, and I'm wordy by ...

Ooh, that's good to hear you're working on the next chapter! c:

'Twas my pleasure. :D I understand. I don't do much planning either, haha.

Well that is brilliant! (both things! XD) I was just fretting about what to review tonight, haha.

You're welcome! And I totally get what you mean about not wanting to fill the chapter with all that- I think I just got a little too carried away! XP ...

Thanks Skins!!! I like that idea about Mason worrying a bit there. And I'll get on that world stuff and stuff C: I think I know how to do that ...