HollyM64

You have a talent for writing action, especially the faster-paced stuff. The atmosphere you created was really good and I like how well established everything felt. The overall pacing was ...

Very nice idea for a story, executed well. I liked the use adjectives and the sense of being trapped in a role that you created. The vocabulary is ranged and ...

Yay, this one updated! The style keeps developing, alternating between this guy being terrifying and also really funny, and I love it. Nothing is better than someone being accidentally funny. ...

You have a very powerful and compelling writing style, my friend. The structure was well thought out, the language was almost haunting and very well chosen and the first person ...

I really like this. The actual idea is great in and of itself, but the execution is excellent. I love the structure and the insulting language, it really does drive ...

Great idea executed brilliantly! I love the structure, especially the irregularity of the line rhythm in places. The rhyme scheme was equally good, the pacing was spot on and the ...

I'm a huge fan of Greek mythology, though I'm not sure how I feel about you making me feel bad for Arachne and Medusa -_- (especially having read the Percy ...

I know I kind of referenced this in the last chapter, but you are bloody good with your imagery! I love this character, especially the way his thoughts work. Not ...

Really good poem about how downright crippling Agoraphobia can be (I have social anxiety myself, but my friend is agoraphobic.) The title suits it well and I love the imagery ...

For a short, this really isn't half bad! And that's as someone who doesn't really read dystopian or political. The structure could have been a little better, but the idea ...

Very interesting premise and I would be lying if I said I wasn't highly amused. It's always fun to see lazy writing and cliches called out and this is a ...

Well, I didn't see that coming! Incredibly creative, well planned and well executed story. I like how there were scattered hints that something was wrong, but the twist still feels ...

Love the use of imagery! It's always interesting reading about characters with a lack of emotion or have a slightly psychotic edge, it keeps the reader on their toes. The ...