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Not scary story and yet I still got a bone chilling feel afterwards. Lol, you already know I call you one of the most talented writers I have talk to. ...

Well yeah, like I told you I have a baby sister who means the world to me and like ren I practically raised her. We did have our mom, but ...

Hey im sorry i been busy but i finally got some read your edit......8 feel the same as i did the first time i read this, but i do feel ...

Hey thanks for the review...lol I am sorry to put you threw a rough patch of reading. I know I have a habit of jumping from character to character. But ...

Thank you for the review....i plan on doing all gramatical checks once i finish the book. I know its not fair tp ask people to over look my gramatical errors ...

Hey take your time, I book like this you cannot rush through

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So I get the privilege of booting this poem out of the green room huh? Let's go! Okay so first off let say I don't get the feel you was ...

Thank you for the insight, will defiantly try to remember this when rewriting the story.

Thank you so much, this was beyond helpful for when I go back a rewrite this. But I do want to ask you, do you really think I made Shevia ...

Well I liked it the way it was, I mean I saw what you were going for and everything, the picture was very clear as I read on. you had ...

Thank you

Thank guess, i draw a lot of inspiration from mama's and anime, so I kind of writ what are in my head. I really do try to make it so ...

Thank you for the review and tip....i didn't know how to distinguish a thought from speech without saying that's what they where doing. I will now start using italics when ...

@Tortwag, I understand, but I just love to read, so regardless weather something is old or new, I am willing to read it and as long as I like it ...