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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Liquidate

    Hey Aley! This is Ol' Hobbitman222 giving you a review as well! I agree with many of the points Writer1204 made in the previous review. I believe you are a ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Why Opposites Attract

    Hey acm! HobbitMan here! I wanted to congratulate you on a well composed short story. I'm no professional, but I did not see any grammar issues throughout your piece. Although ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Hard

    Hey BEWriter! Just read your poem and I really liked it. I can totally relate to having people judge me, as can others. I like that you made it very ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ever since

    Hey RoyalHighness! I wanted to start out by saying that this is a very interesting poem. I'm not going to sit here and tell you that there are numerous grammar ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death Awaits

    Hey MysticWorss! Thanks again for the review of my story. I figured since you helped me out it was only right to check out what you've got. And I have ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death Awaits

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    Hey MysticWorss! Thanks again for the review of my story. I figured since you helped me out it was only right to check out what you've got. And I have ...

    Jun 19, 2016


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