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Re: United we Stand
I'm sure someone might have suggested this, but something you could do is post it as a novel? If it has as many long chapters as your story has, it ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Rain
Being a dried out person who absolutely adores the rain, the title immediately caught my attention. As I read on through your story, the website popped in my head. After ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Addiction
With all of the grammatical errors already mentioned above, I figure I'll just tell you that it was a great read. Now, I don't drink (too young and I hate ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: My Forbidden Love
Now, I never EVER read poems (until now that is). I never liked them unless they were in the form of lyrics to a song. I'm not a poet, I ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Suicide
This story amazes me. It's very well written, with a great plot and rather great dialogue. I'm used to stories that, at one point or another, announce the names of ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: In A Second
I really like your style. You went from her PoV to his, and interconnected them very well. The story itself is really good, especially if this is your very first ...
Aug 23, 2011
