Hippyhoodrat

Thank you

Thank you :)

Well thank you for taking a chance on this dramatic, romantic writer. Working on fixing the huge sentence as we speak...any ideas on how I can fill in the "you" ...

The huge sentences were kind of a stylistic choice but I've gotten a lot of comments about that so I'll see how I can break that up. Thanks so much ...

Hi. I enjoyed this...just a few comments. I think the choice to be somewhat simple about it and go short was really cool. Same kind of concept with the title. ...

Wow. I seriously loved this. A little dark, definitely but really great. Also loved the rhyming.

I have to say this made me sad in the best possible way. Definitely kind of morbid but an amazing piece of writing.

Aside from being a great peice of writing and beautifully written, I have to say it's also completely accurate. Nice job.