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Re: Detective Manpuddin on "The Explosive Tomato"
Awesome! How old is he?
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Watched
Thanks. It seems like I need to clear some things up. Valeska's 25 and her brothers are 18, 17 and 16, which is why she's the leader. The bit where ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Watched
Thanks guys. I have no plans to write a next part though. It's a short story.
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: The Beasts of the Barrens - A Parody
This made my day. If you write more PM me or I'll send my minions after you.
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: The Raid
P.S. How do you write in the dark? With my psychic powers! Thanks guys. Peace.
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(4)[death]
There doesn't seem to be anything at stake. Put them, or someone or something they care about in danger so that the only way to remove or overcome that danger ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: The Raid
Thanks guys. Oh, and he's not Attila the Hun.
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Spatial Awareness
One more thing. Characters make or break a comedy so make sure they have plenty of quirks.
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Side Ch. 1
Wow, thanks guys. All advice is appreciated. Your critiques are epic Karsten. When Nate gets this new badge system up I'm nominating you for every reviewing award there is, and ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Side Ch. 1
Thanks Classy. Glad you liked it. Luke is on his first mission out of training. Alfred's been in the army for years. That's why he's more confident while Luke's scared ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: Has anyone read 'The Book Thief' by : Markus Zusak?
I haven't read the book, but I've been fortunate enough to attend a seminar by Markus Zusak. He said he rewrote the first chapter 80 times to get it right. ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (3)
Oh no, I'm late. Sorry. I guess you could say that I couldn't see your PM through the mountain of exam study surrounding me :x The bar was a dimly ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: The Janitors -Chapter 2 (Trash)
Wow, this is huge. I'm going to have to do this on the weekend.
Oct 14, 2009 -
Re: SHAMAN - Chapter 6.1
which also felt odd. He hadn’t been walking on all fours since he was a baby, but it felt completely normal now; The bits I've underlined cotradict each other. I'm ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Any book ideas?
Have you read The Hunger Games?
Aug 15, 2009
