HikariMocha

i. loved. it. it gave me a spooky, depressed vibe- simply beautiful . the way you put it into words are indescribable, keep up the good work! i would not ...

This poem is beautiful. I can tell your feelings and your hopes, and how they aren't real. It is a sort of bittersweet peice. There is happiness but at the ...

That's such a beautiful poem, the words fit together perfectly. The way you stare at me, with your hypnotizing eyes, I fall deeper and deeper in love with you. Is ...

Hello there and welcome I like this poem a lot. I think you did a pretty good job. The ending is just unexpected. Beautiful stuff hey. I really have nothing ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. I'm going to first some advice here that could be be considered a poem should have more than sweetness, it should have ...