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  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Shadow Story (Original Story)

    Heya, HiddenMask here to give you a review. I really enjoyed reading this, it was written very well and the pacing was very good at the beginning. I'm gonna give ...

    Nov 23, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Prisoner of Crime

    Honestly, all I can say about this is I loved it a lot. The feeling of guilt was very well written without being too blatant. The beginning descriptions felt very ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The woodman

    Personally, I've always been a fan of fairy tales, and this is an intruiging one. It feels like it's part of a larger world, (Possibly because of the woodman's hinted ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: A Backwards Suburbia: Snippets From an Extraordinary Town

    Hey! Here with a review for your great piece. SO, I love the atmosphere here in the writing. It's very creepy and surreal, especially the bit about the houses. The ...

    Mar 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Little Red's Return- A Story in 100 Words

    So first off, I love how this walks the knife edge of being really creepy and surreal, and being hilarious. The simple, clear and precise sentences get the message across ...

    Mar 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The True Story of Cinderella

    This was very well written and absolutely hilarious, especially at the beginning. The voices of the Evil Queen, Narrator, and a bit of the Stepmother are very distinct, and they ...

    Mar 20, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thief's Penance

    The only thing I'd say this piece needs would be a little more description. It's a bit sparse, and thought it's obvious the story is more centered around dialogue and ...

    Mar 20, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I miss the birds in winter

    First off, I really like the premise of this poem/story. It's slightly hopeful, and the end paragraph (Stanza?); "until the first blackbird wakes you up and trills his first song" ...

    Mar 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Culture Re: Medusa

    First off, I myself actually love this myth and have always empathized with Medusa first and foremost, so it's really interesting to see a different version of it. I liked ...

    Mar 16, 2019


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