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Re: Shadow Story (Original Story)
Heya, HiddenMask here to give you a review. I really enjoyed reading this, it was written very well and the pacing was very good at the beginning. I'm gonna give ...
Nov 23, 2019 -
Re: Prisoner of Crime
Honestly, all I can say about this is I loved it a lot. The feeling of guilt was very well written without being too blatant. The beginning descriptions felt very ...
Apr 1, 2019 -
Re: The woodman
Personally, I've always been a fan of fairy tales, and this is an intruiging one. It feels like it's part of a larger world, (Possibly because of the woodman's hinted ...
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: A Backwards Suburbia: Snippets From an Extraordinary Town
Hey! Here with a review for your great piece. SO, I love the atmosphere here in the writing. It's very creepy and surreal, especially the bit about the houses. The ...
Mar 25, 2019 -
Re: Little Red's Return- A Story in 100 Words
So first off, I love how this walks the knife edge of being really creepy and surreal, and being hilarious. The simple, clear and precise sentences get the message across ...
Mar 25, 2019 -
Re: The True Story of Cinderella
This was very well written and absolutely hilarious, especially at the beginning. The voices of the Evil Queen, Narrator, and a bit of the Stepmother are very distinct, and they ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: Thief's Penance
The only thing I'd say this piece needs would be a little more description. It's a bit sparse, and thought it's obvious the story is more centered around dialogue and ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: I miss the birds in winter
First off, I really like the premise of this poem/story. It's slightly hopeful, and the end paragraph (Stanza?); "until the first blackbird wakes you up and trills his first song" ...
Mar 17, 2019 -
Re: Medusa
First off, I myself actually love this myth and have always empathized with Medusa first and foremost, so it's really interesting to see a different version of it. I liked ...
Mar 16, 2019
