Hibiscus

I didn't read anyone's comments, expect like, the first two, so if I say anything repetitive, I didn't know. Anyway. I. loved. it. Now, I loved it until a certain ...

Your poems make mine look like trash!!! *Runs away crying* ...Ahem, now that I've gotten over that, I have come to review a piece of yours, because you're always reviewing ...

I didn't really pick up on whatever tone you were trying to displaying that others pointed out, but I didn't think it was necessarily saying that the poet thought they ...

Ceramic bones puncture plastic skin, acrylic eyes roll in their sockets. Denim clings low, limbs dangle before white screen: a lady caged in a body. Two-page ads blare the name— ...

I have a major soft sport for music, so I liked this, lol. I really think music is one of the reasons I can get by... and I really understood ...

*Sniff* I don't think everyone can say this, because I don't know about everyone on here, but I can really relate to this in a sort of weird and off ...

This just sort of... ruined it for me.. It was far too blunt. It was like eating a lovely crumpet, but there's a rock at the bottom and you choke ...

God... you must love food. And I must be torturing myself by reading this delicious- er, wonderful poem. Once again, fantastic imagery. It's like painting a picture in my mind. ...

the little blue flowers have appeared again, taste-testing throaty with dust breathing, swelling, rising warm and bloated like love-thoughts and for an hour or so the bread murmurs and stirs ...

:( I liked it... very descriptive. The end made everything so much better, though. Not that it was a happy ending, but it just kind of completed the piece, really ...

These days, the world lacks color. Originality is what we crave. Dont be like every other. Dont be the world's bland slave. Be who you want to be. Dont listen ...

I clicked on this kind of as a joke, lol. I was looking for something to read, and I didn't really know what I was expecting from the title. What ...

So at first I didn't feel like trying to crack the code and was going to go the easy way, but I eventually did so, lol. Took me a while, ...

I didn't read the other's comments, but the only thing I would change would be "downwards" to "downward". Other than that, I really didn't know where this was going, but ...

So you admire William Shakespeare, eh? I, in all honesty, have to admit that I like your poetry better than this. I haven't read any of your other writtings... if ...