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Re: hush
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Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:28 am
The thing about this one is that it’s formatting, it is kind of tall and skinny. I really like the actual poem though. Love it! -
Re: hush
The thing about this one is that it’s formatting, it is kind of tall and skinny. I really like the actual poem though. Love it!
Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:28 am -
Re: hush
This poem is kind of peculiar, but still super cool. It’s really sad.
Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:22 am -
Re: Eyes that should never be Seen
This is super cool, it sounds like something I might write. It is awesome, it sort of reminds me of Alice in Wonderland for some reason. It’s kind of sad, ...
Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:20 am -
Re: Eyes that should never be Seen
This is super cool, it sounds like something I might write. It is awesome, it sort of reminds me of Alice in Wonderland for some reason. It’s kind of sad, ...
Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:20 am -
Re: Two
Nice story. However it should maybe have a few more description pieces. Other than that it is super cool. 😎🧐😀
Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:05 am -
Re: Two
Nice story. However it should maybe have a few more description pieces. Other than that it is super cool. 😎🧐😀
Wed Feb 06, 2019 7:05 am -
Re: A Bright Idea
I loved it! However you should maybe try to add a few shorter sentences to have more variety. Lots of description, amazing.
Wed Feb 06, 2019 6:32 am