HelpSOS

Don't forget how the movies AND the books got worse the longer they went on. You wonder if J.K. Just did it for the money.

I love what you said, so did my friend.

thank you

No I didn't edit it before I posted it. Thanks for pointing those out, they are fixed. And my friend is happy you like it. Risa I get confused easily ...

Loved it, it made me visualize what was happening. REMEMBER PUNCTUATION (inside joke [not really a lot of people know it])

I posted this because. Um yeah it is a writing peice. I don't care how you see it, it's just something I wrote. :twisted: - HelpSOS p.s. Chain mail always ...

Major issues.

Nice job. -Berney

Is this poem suppose to tell me not to ride my bike. And most kids play in neighborhoods, where people can hear them. This poem confuses me. =( :?