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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tales: Chapter 1

    You're welcome. And in completely unrelated news: I need to finish watching the anime that your picture is from.

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Aiga: The Light Within Tears (Prologue)

    When I wrote 'clicking' I meant 'snapping'. I'll change it to that to avoid confusion. :s What you said about her repeating herself is something I'll have to change. Not ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Aiga: The Light Within Tears (Prologue)

    Thanks for the review! Regarding the prologue, this is the first thing I wrote. It chronologically takes place prior to the start of the novel, and it is also a ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Aiga: The Light Within Tears (Prologue)

    Wow, that's actually a legit error. I actually missed that? D: Anyway, thank you for the review, and for reading it. I'll leave this as it is, but edit the ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Aiga: The Light Within Tears (Prologue)

    Thanks a lot! I needed that about the dialogue, because it always confused me, I'll admit. It was the main thing I didn't know, as well as when to make ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Aiga: The Light Within Tears (Prologue)

    Aha! See you then. :3

    Feb 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: Home O' Umbra

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad for your honesty. To be honest it was my first time trying this, and I didn't put as much effort into it as I ...

    Feb 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: Home O' Umbra

    Thanks for the review. I'll be honest that I didn't think it through very much because I am not really a writer of poetry, and if I'm honest, I actually ...

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: Home O' Umbra

    Yes, shadow or darkness (I normally use it for darkness). To be honest, I don't know a whole lot about poetry myself. When I won the contest, the judges said ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: *No Name Yet* Prologue

    No problem. It was a pleasure to read it. :)

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Chapter 1~Vex

    You're welcome. And that is an issue a lot of writers seem to have. It's easy to make that mistake, especially if you read both in other fiction. But when ...

    Jan 31, 2015


“A good book isn't written, it's rewritten.”
— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing