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Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter two; The Dark Scale
Hello again, The first thing that strikes me is the way that the MC reacts to the things around him. He always reacts with some sort of inherent awe. Take ...
Jan 28, 2019 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter one; awakening.
Hey, this is your friend, and this is the first review that I am going to do. I really like the imagery that you have here in your first chapter. ...
Nov 13, 2018