Hecate

Oh that was my previus draft. I have made it way better in my other draft that's also posted here. I know itr's confusing which is why I followed Hippie's ...

Oh that was my previus draft. I have made it way better in my other draft that's also posted here. I know itr's confusing which is why I followed Hippie's ...

Thank you, that was very, very enriching and now I really know how to make my story better. I'm glad you like it by the way.

A huge thanks to everyone who took the timr to edit this. Okay ,first of all Sela Locke: This is the way my characters speak ,because this may seem like ...

Oh wow. Guess I'll just make mine a little different, then. Thanks for that little fact, though.

Sweet. Guess it shows what it's like to be in a bad relationship. I really liked it. you made the characters sound so real ,in such a short story ,giving ...

I will give you some advice. Try posting your writing in smaller pieces so people are more likely to edit it. i did read some of it and I think ...

Thank you. I am working on my second draft. I don't understand what you mean by the titles though. When a count marries someone they share the title ,then the ...

Wow ,that was funny. I tried not to be too offended ,because I love the book . I liked it ,like it was nothing major ,but it was kind of ...