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Re: UFO war
That was really interesting. I liked the flying saucers, but take out the description of them as a "fried egg." It takes away from the seriousness of it. I do ...
Jun 30, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved Chapter One Scene Seven (Finale)
That was really, really good. Couldn't stop reading it. I thought the grammar and spelling was good, but most of the fantasy names were hard to pronounce. As a fellow ...
Jun 30, 2012 -
Re: The War of Night and Day 1-3
Overall, I liked it. You had a few misspelled words and could use some work on your grammar, but it was okay. I liked the dragon parts, but maybe you ...
Jun 30, 2012 -
Re: Shooter- a horror story
Lot's of "..." and use only one question mark... but other than that, this was pretty good. I'd like to know how this happened, and what happens after this.
Jun 29, 2012