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Thank you! Glad that you like it. I'll upload more of my work later on.

When I say real life events, I mean literally, everything, the robot idea included, that's what he said to get me to do it. But I can see how that ...

The poem is based off real life events. I was told to edit the poem this way by my poetry lecturer, she said it worked better without all the 'explaining ...

Thank you :) I'm glad that you like it.

Thank you! You're very sweet to say that :) I'm so happy you like it :)

Thanks for your review :) I really appreciate it, just one thing that I want to try and get across about the poem, if that's OK, haha, I do agree ...

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to edit it today. I slept on it before and now I think I'm prepared to make the right adjustments.

Thank you all for your comments! Yes, I do seem to forget that I am writing for an audience, and they aren't going to know what exactly I mean unless ...

I don't think you were harsh at all, I do think it is a little imature, especially for a poem dealing with something so defining. I will certainly take note ...

Thank you very much, I'm glad you both like it :) Even the most awful things manage their own beauty sometimes, you enjoying it, I would say, is an example ...

Thanks I'm glad you both like it :)

You're certainly right! I need to change it to: 'too dark to bare' Glad that you like it :)

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