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Oh, I never received a notif for this, lel

No problem!

Oh, basically just the bit I mentioned at the end with Mishka getting away so easily, and then I guess the guards not guarding the vault with the precious crown ...

No need to apologize, man. I'm just here trying to help ya out! I left a comment above on the changes. Nice work!

Hey! Just read over your edit and this is a great improvement! I'm impressed. You took the story from an exposition-y series of facts on your world and gave it ...

Oh I didn't get a notif for this. And oops I meant, kinda, like, tomorrow lel. Sorrz - I'm wiped right now, but I do plan to get to this!

Please remind me to review this when I have time.

No problem, and no worries that you rarely write in English! I hope this didn't come off too harshly. I'm only looking to help out!

Ohh, I thought that was just the title. The description implied it would be longer, so I was expecting more than this. I'd forgotten drabbles were a thing, whoops. My ...

Oh, alright! Btw, I just recalled a thing I forgot to point out in my review - at one point you misspelled "dais" as "dias" She pushes aside her guards ...

"I read every word of your reply like it was the last thing I read, to be honest." Oh, was it repetitive? I was worried I'd accidentally repeated myself a ...

Oh, and I forgot to mention alongside the bit that I quoted -- the wording there is a bit odd? It feels like a broken clause with the "she heard ...

Ohhh, snap, that's crazy, then. I caught the bit about the "reign of Fa'Una", but heck, that's her corpse . I wasn't expecting that, haha. Yeah, could use a bit ...

!! No prob! Glad to be of some help, lel; nice; Food; Network; humor;, btw

buddy, this is a short story