Hattable

For some reason I read some of the lines in Mickey, Donald, and Goofys' voices... XD Interesting lyrics though...? Sorry, I'm no good with lyrics and poems and the like. ...

Well, if you're looking to understand God just - uh - open the Qur'an, Bible, Torah, or whatever holy scripture you wish to endeavor into and -uh, well - read. ...

When we were writing it (I'm the co-writer by the way :P) I didn't envision her parents as drunk or abusive, just angry that she'd slept in and not done ...

Thanks for the review and congrats on your first review! I'll get on fixing those grammatical errors as soon as I can, I know I skimmed over them the first ...

Thank you, thank you. The "tell say" part was a mistake, must've glossed over it when I was "proofreading" (just skimming through it :P). The dagger part... I couldn't think ...

Thanks for the review. As I explained in the description, I had a challenge of beginning each sentence with the word that ended the last. Therefore your suggestion, here: This ...

Thanks, The narrator is basically escaping from some prison or camp where they feed you a strange mush that kills your soul. They are shaken up by the thought of ...

Thanks, I plan to but I gotta get some other works done first. Glad you liked it!

Thanks! :D I wanted to put some more details but it was difficult at times to make sure that a sentence made sense when I had to use the last ...

I hope you meant "scared", I didn't mean to scar your family for life or anything... o.o

^That wasn't supposed to send twice... xD I get what you mean now. I'm surprised I even came up with a plot of any kind with this challenge in the ...

Sure, I'll check it out. I'm glad you liked this!

Thanks, it wasn't too hard but I did get caught up trying to think of a sentence making sense with the last word starting the next sentence a few times. ...

Thanks, it wasn't too hard but I did get caught up trying to think of a sentence making sense with the last word starting the next sentence a few times. ...

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't expecting such a generous review but I'm sure more "harsh" reviews will come :P It felt like I repeated some parts a ...