Hattable

I just saw that as I submitted my review to chapter 14!! haha-- hopefully they'll still be in the green room by Monday 'cause I won't have a ton of ...

OHhhh, cannibalism! I forgot I called that, haha. So was the meat that he fed Rana and her dad human meat too?

Ahhh, I wasn't sure if it was advisable to go ahead and work on the next thing until you had confirmation. Like, wasn't sure if reviews would count if they ...

Ohhh, I thought that perhaps he was stuck as a prince until he married, but part of me also thought maybe his father was still alive so he was still ...

I'm laTE to responD! But glad you liked it!! You have a gr8 day, too!

Oops-- and yeah I'll definitely try to up my description of settings and whatnot next time. I tend to not delve into that too much for fear that I'll get ...

I kinda imagined it as a stony clearing but I guess I forgot to mention that, oops. But so yeah, no grass, lel. I marked it 16 because the gore ...

!! Thankss-- will respond on Discord as well *finger guns*

!!! Thanks- glad you enjoy my reviews, lel The touches were definitely innocent, yeah, just not exactly the behavior of a disciplined head of security, like you describe. If you ...

Ahh, gotcha on the friend thing. That makes sense, and I sorta had that sense but I guess I thought it was the other way more than that. Uhhh, glad ...

!! No problem! And yeah, I didn't bring up the skin thing to call ya out on offense - more just a warning before ya got caught by anyone who ...

yEAH I didn't realize it had gotten so long, haha

The repetition of "recalling" was on purpose, but alright, I see your reasoning. Still not getting "secant". I couldn't mention the ship and then Leigh's actions in the same sentence ...

Oh, and what other words would you suggest in place of "flipped" and "upside down"?* Thanks for the review, btw!

Uhhh, "descending" doesn't mean falling in that context. The ship is landing. Why are you suggesting "flipped" and "upside down" be changed? They seem fine to me but I'd like ...